My first poem .. ( chance)..!!1

[غدا ألقاك]

الرابط لايظهر فى الأرشيف (الرابط لايظهر فى الأرشيف)
no more chances to give.
no more moments to live
so now without me you will live
and no more love to give



you drove me mad
and left me sad
you broke my heart
and left me apart



so why did you do so
and left me alone in the snow
where i have known
that you will never be back again
you left me alone
with alot of pain


but now you come back
but my heart will not be back
cuz now its mine
and for no one it will be given
so go away
and let me stay
with my broken heart
thats my way..!!


thats my first poem... i know its not so good , but i hope that i will make another better :18:one

:icon26:غدا ألقاك (الرابط لايظهر فى الأرشيف) :icon26:

[فجر الاسلام]

excellent my baby
but now you come back
but my heart will not be back
cuz now its mine
and for no one it will be given
so go away
and let me stay
with my broken heart
thats my way..!!


those words have effected me

i wish to u more shine

GOOD LUCK

[غدا ألقاك]

thanks for your reply.. iam really happy to see your reply..hope that others will like it :cupidarrow:

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it's aswome
you have good talent

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oh it iz amazin for ur first poem

after sum time

you gonna be MORE wanderful

keep goin hunny

nd with all my best wishezZz